BAND - POWER OF THE VOID

The International School of Kuala Lumpur provides ( silence) an exceptional education that challenges each student to develop (silence) the attitudes, skills, knowledge and understanding to become a highly sucessful, spirited, socially responsible global citizen.

I feel like adding a silence after the word 'provides' and 'develop' creates the best tention. When you add a VOID after provides and develop, the audience might have questions about what the school provides, and what each student develop, and would feel nervous and tense. The tention would be building up inside the audience, waiting for the reader to read on the ISKL Misson Statement. In visual art, the tention was built up from audience also by making them keep interest in it, and keep wondering. For example, in the movie 'Jurassic Park,' the tention was built up by questions like: 'When is the T-rex coming?' or 'what's the T-rex going to do?' With paintings, there was a red dot in the middle of many green dots, and that made the red dot stand out more (to me). I kept asking myself: ' What is the red dot doing there?' Today at school, we read a story that also had tention inside it, and then talked about it. I realized that there were so many void around us that created tention and that I hadn't really thought deeply about it until now. I feel that I can understand it now, and I will think about it more than before. I'm gald we studied tention, or power of the void in band.